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This probably won't even be counted as a review, but I had to say how wonderful i thought it was anyways. It was so... What's the word? Beautiful. I love ...

Haha, it reminds me of a mother goose rhyme! Only a few suggestions: 1: You capitalize the first letter in every line, but I would leave the ones that are ...

Wow, there's not much to say about this; its so good. You said you felt it was a bit empty, but then again, that is part of your title and ...

They walked together, And he held her hand. Her heart bleeding... In Floods. mmmm... I'm not sure about this line. First of all, floods doesn't need to be capitalized. I ...

Wow 'titia. This is simply amazing. Amazing. Its so exciting! And creative! Ahh! It ended! I must read more! There's hardly any mistakes too. I don't know what else to ...

Laetitiaaaaaa!!!!!! Hi! This was really, really, good! I'd just add in one word in the last line... Like: With winter's *insert word here* long since gone... cause it would make ...

Hi! Nice to see some more of your work! The first thing I noticed was how much of an improvement this is from the first piece of yours I read. ...

Wow great poem, and I see no problem with the rhyming. In this line... My maths is ever daunting Is there a reason for the 's' that I'm missing? I ...

I was quickly scrolling down the home page and was about to click the exit button at the top, when I saw your user name and immediately clicked on this ...

This is a well written poem, but I would call it a bit too flowery. By this I mean that there are a lot of extra adjectives where simply the ...

As they say: "Short and Sweet." :D A good and simple little poem here, but I do have a few suggestions: Song in My Head A simple tune Playing in ...

he sat With her hand on her forehead. Confused and hopelessly distressed. He came And sat next to her. He hoped he wouldn’t be a pest. I would try and ...

Hi! Besides needing punctuation, this was really good. We have been friends since forever I would take out the 'since' and just make it: We have been friends forever. You ...

Amazing job, as always. (Although not always... Your keeping me from my homework!) I think you gave me nightmares. “There’s something in my closet.” Daniel put it very bluntly in ...

Wow, thats really pretty. I don't have any suggestions because I couldn't find anything wrong. Most poems people write for other people are usually boring and cliche ( You mean ...